Hi, mango here with a quick review!
No one else mentioned this but I felt your choice of theme to explore was really interesting, which is like meta-writing in a sense.
I like the gradual change of mood throughout the poem, where at the start one feels overwhelmed and horrible, like sitting under a mountain of stress and anxiety.
Afterwards though the mood gets uplifted which was really nice and rather unexpected.
The tone and use of language contributed a lot to the funky and unorthodox vibe of the poem which was a breath of fresh air compared to usual others. The language was direct and conversational yet slightly unsually, making for the inclusion of a casual vibe as well.
Overall this was a really cute poem which you don't see often.