You still glow -
I don't care what they say;
You still shine
And brighten up my day,
'Cause what you've been through
Can't take your glow away;
You're still loved -
You're not defined
By the pain that breaks
Your heart and mind,
So I want you to know,
You still glow.
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This was a cute poem! I liked it.I think this poem is about someone (You,the narrator) telling another person they’re still amazing no matter what.They can still be fantastic and lovely.What happened to someone doesn’t define them.It’s who they are.It’s what’s on the inside that counts.I liked this a lot.I really did.I hope you have an awesome and fun day and night.
This was a cute poem! I liked it.I think this poem is about someone (You,the narrator) telling another person they’re still amazing no matter what.They can still be fantastic and lovely.What happened to someone doesn’t define them.It’s who they are.It’s what’s on the inside that counts.I liked this a lot.I really did.I hope you have an awesome and fun day and night.
Very good.
The classic and all too real situation of someone Who is loved that dose not love themself.
I came here from your poem "Till you find your glow again" And I can see more clearly what your intention was now.
You had more to say about this subject so you wrote another poem about it.
Strangely I feel that the two poems seem to lead into one another but I also feel an absence of another Persons voice.
I don't entirely know what I'm saying.
Bottom line This is pretty good.
I honestly like "Till You Find Your Glow Again" a bit more but this was where it started.
so Keep up the good work.
Awwww! This is such an awesome poem! Personally I can’t write poems to save my life but then there are poems like yours! Enough exclamation marks. I really like that idea of peoples “glow” and it is very true. I especially like when you said:
“You’re not defined
By the pain that breaks
Your heart and mind.”
Your poem has a really nice flow to it and good unforced feeling writing. Looking forward to more poetry like this!
Hewwo @WinnyWriter! @NastyMajesty poppin' in here for a quick review! ^-^ nice to see ya! Okay... wow... just wow! This is so heartwarming, I absolutely love it! The way that you rhyme all these words makes the poem flow so effortlessly. It has an amazing rhythm and it just sends a magnificent message. No matter what someone has been through it's just a great thing to let them know that they're still loved and this poem depicts that in such a beautiful way. This poem is absolutely amazing, keep up the great work! I loved reading this. Keep writing! Best wishes
-NastyMajesty