Young Writers Society

Aw, this is so sweet. Your sister clearly loves you!

Hey there Kat here this will be a short review for review day
Go Team WHY?

Aw so your sister wrote this? And she is seven ? That's so adorable ! I'm not sure I can review a work for someone so young but just keep encouraging her, writing is a wonderful thing especially at a young age. Typo, the first line is missing an a . I would normally nit pick like good should be well and all that other stuff but I think this is amazing for a seven year old . She even had some repetition going on how adorable .

She is a little poet :3
~Kat

This is really cute I love it! I remember writing poems for my sister when I was little so yeah this is really cute! This is short and sweet and really cute! Tell your little sister that I would love to see more written by her as well as your stuff! But yeah this is really cute. I wish my cousin would do that for me but he's lazy. Well to make this a "review" well I must say that, the style is simple and tasteful. And well overall its really cute. And wow Natasia you cook that much? I'm so lazy I couldn't possibly I could make like lunch but not much else. Anyway, this was really cute and yeah good job to your baby sister and thank you for helping her with her talents!

So, I don't exactly know how to review this in the usual format I usually review in.. haha but it's all good. This poem is pretty sick. I mean anyone who cooks three meals a day for her sister, yeah I'd write a poem about that too.

There's really nothing wrong with it, and for a seven-year-old it's a masterpiece. It beats what I wrote when I was seven haha. So, yeah I honestly have critiques, because this poem is pretty perfect . The message that I get from this poem is that you are pretty good at cooking... so congrats! Haha.

Have a great day, and thanks for making me smile.

Keep writing bro.

~#41

This is so sweet! I won't really critique it as it was was written by someone so young, but well done Kanome's sister. You wrote a good poem! I don't really have much else to say, but keep writing and improving.

~Kazey

Kanome, I love this. This is so sweet. I don't know what to say. You must really really love your sister.
I do think you could edit out the space at the top. Don't know why it's there--maybe a replacement for "a"? or maybe something else, like your sister's grammar.
Well, there isn't much to say about this because it's your sister's work. No nitpicks of any sort except for that one and it's too sweet and short to actually make a review out of. No hard feeling though. Love it. Tell your sister she's so sweet.