Hey, I just wanted to say that this is a very carefully written poem. Each word seems placed specifically. Instead of
"You told me you love me."
You wrote..
"You told me you could love me."
And that makes all the difference.
"Their" words were your one reason for enduring this suffering that they cast upon you. And you know you deserve better. Yet no one is there when you are crying out for help.
For that, I am sorry.
But I'm glad you called this your "path." Because paths can diverge.
I do hope that you have a good day.
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