Hello, I would like to start by saying this is very a strong poem. You have some very strong imagery hence Autumn Winds but I wish we got to see a little more. Perhaps you could have added little moments to show the effects like being in your room and mentally beating yourself up or eating alone ( Of course I don't know the backstory of this piece.) but I feel that would heighten the emotion of this poem and it pop. Regardless I enjoyed it very much and love the themes you trying to convey as it is very soft without stripping it of the anger people can feel growing up or living like this.
Keep it up.
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