Hey there!!
I saw your work in the green room so i figured id check it out.
My opinion on this piece
I think that this is definitely very thought out and real. Its a real experience that people go through almost everyday, bringing in the trauma from a mother added a level of depth to this writing. Hating the person you once loved is a horrible experience and it just makes your heart heavy and angry, I feel like this is definitely displayed throughout this writing.
One thing i would change:
The commentary about losing faith in your God kind of threw me off track a bit, because while yes it hurts to share a connection with someone you no longer love, God is a higher power that shouldn't be a factor in a love situation.
My favorite part:
I love just the pure raw hatred shown in this, expressing your feelings so freely because you know they didn't have the right to make you feel like that.
Overall:
I really like your poetry and I liked what it represented!
Thank you for taking the time to write and post this, I hope this review is of some help to you!
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