Hi, ZeldaIsShiek here to review your poetry and put a stop to the wicked Werewolves' plans! May the Witches reign supreme! I am also here to critique your work to make you and your writing better as a result. I am really excited to review this poem because I have reviewed a lot of poems on self-harm recently and I am happy to be reviewing another one. It is a very important and very serious issue, and though the ending is humorous and the innocent rhyme scheme makes it feel childish, the truth is that self-harm is a serious issue that many suffer with and should not be taken lightly. Ready? Let's begin.
I really like this poem because of the innocent and clever rhyme scheme that make it seem like nothing is wrong and that everything is fine within the work itself and outside of it. The truth is that self-harm is a very serious issue, however silly the ending may be. I think that the best part of the poem is the ending, because taking serious and dangerous topics and turning them into dark humor is one of the silliest, yet darkest thing one can do in a poem. For that reason alone, this poem is one of the best poems I have ever read from you. Period. The only thing that I can think of that you might want to change is... well, nothing! Basically perfect! Keep writing amazing self-harm poems that inspire me to review them!
-ZeldaIsShiek
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