Hi! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review.
First of all, this poem is 100 percent true. I loved it! Everything is so perfect and beautifully written that there are no words to describe this poem. I did not notice any grammatical errors as such. The words flowed out seamlessly and covered the whole poem. It is very relevant and honest, and I am sure that most of us can relate to it. The first two lines of the fourth sentence were so beautiful.
"My best is a nervous stutter
With downcast eyes"
It portrays frustration and helplessness so well. Its my favorite here.
I know this is a very comment-ish review but there's not much which can be recommended to a poet of such a high caliber as you who has written such a magnificent and artistic piece. Keep up the lovely work!
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