Hello 4revgreen!
I just want to say that I really like this poem! It's short, but it's more than enough to give me the chills. I love the imagery, the rhyme scheme, and just the general creepiness conveyed. I think each line flowed really well together. One line I especially liked was "with each sip of the dastardly devils drink". Maybe it was because of the alliteration or the idea... I don't know. It just really stuck out to me.
I don't really have anything else to point out about this... aside from what earlier reviewers already did... so I'll just say this again: great job!
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