Hey, Ally here for a review!
To start off with, the poem has such a strong first stanza that immediately draws the reader in. I absolutely love this poem. It is so strong, and each sentence has a lot of emotion packed into it. Especially the line "Don't you think my veins deserve better blood?" I also liked stating that the person was home, not the house they lived in. I think that made this poem even more relatable, at least relatable to me. Overall, great job. Keep it up and I can't wait to see what else you write!
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