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Nobody
I wrote this a while ago when I was board. It is about a girl who thinks she is a nobody.
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Rewrite The World
I wrote this poem a while ago, so feel free to criticize or review it.
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Once
I wrote this a while ago for school so feel free to pick at it and criticize it.
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A Feather of Hope
Can you please review this, I have to write a poem for my ELA class and I would really like your input on it.
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The Road We Have Taken
This is a poem I had to write for school.
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The Abyss
I would really appreciate it if you could review this.
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Wicked Things
I wrote this awhile ago, it would be really great if I could get some feedback on it.
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Shattered Like Me
I wrote this today, and I would really like some feedback on it.
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I'll Never Forget
I was kind of on a writing spree last night, and I would really like to know if my writing was any good.
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A Writer
A wrote this short poem a couple days ago.
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Silence
I wrote this poem between classes and I would really like some advice on it.
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Story Untold
Haven't written anything in awhile, so some feedback would be nice.
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Dark or Light
I have no idea what this is supposed to be. All I know is that I got bored in science class.
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Sorrow
I write this awhile ago.
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What is Harmony?
I found this when I was looking through my old Word documents.
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You Should Never Wish Away a Day
This is the first poem that I have written in a while.
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Drowned
This is an old poem that I wrote a couple years ago.
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Stuck in the Past
Not really sure what this is, I wrote it late last night.
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An Ocean to Hold Back
Just finished writing this, it would be great if you could tell me what you think about it.
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I Choose You
I have no idea how this turned into a love poem.
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Nothing Left
Something I just wrote today, tell me what you think about it.
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If I Ever Tried
This is a poem about a person who never tried in life, and this is where it got them.
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Sit in the Silence With me
Sit in the Silence With me is a poem written from the perspective a doll who only ever sits on a shelf.
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Waiting for a Day That Will Never Come
This is the first poem I have written in a while.
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The Girl and the Bird
This is the first poem I have written in months after finally getting out of writer's block, so I could really use some feedback on it.
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Through the Smog
In the world, one thing people cannot take away from you are your dreams.
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Our Castle in the Clouds
Imagined if you were lucky enough to find a place worth more than all the riches people can offer.
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The Burden Bearer
This is a poem that goes along with a story I'm writing.
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Our Song
Love is a fickle thing.
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I fear an absence of color
How do you reclaim a piece of you that's been lost?
