The title might be a little too strong, but alas. 
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MY POETRY IS SHIT!
Some say that my poetry,
lacks consistency -
but I don't share this view.
Slowly the penguin shifted,
as the whirling tundra lifted.
Perhaps: I use. Punctuation! incorrectly :~
This does not falter my thoughts' intensity.
Despite the piercing jibes of a "wit" or "critique",
I cherish the guidance from those with technique.
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Honestly ---- hilarious.
Thank you, so very much for the wonderful critiques everyone.
You've all been so kind about this poem, I really feel touched that you like it so much.
If you honestly have any other critiques or opinions on how I can improve this poem, then please share them.
Love
Kris
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that was extremely skillful. i loved it.
not to much else to say, keep it right up.
I really liked this...and who does care about the title??? + it makes your poem stand out from the rest.
I also love the randomness, (penguins and tundras)
Couldn't keep myself from laughing about the misplaced punctuation. lol
I like this (it's kind of hard not to.) The only thing is that it could be longer. It's really hilarious
it doesnt matter what the title is this poem makes you laugh either way although the title does make the poem stand out in the forums.
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f somebody comes along and thinks this poems bad because of the title then they obviosly didnt read it because when you read it u completely forget about the title cause you just want to laugh
This, my friend, is flawless. I loved every word.
Stanza one was funny and witty, while stanza two was creative and thoughtful.
You're getting a star!
First of all, I loved the title. It grabbed me by the face and pulled me in.
I love the parody. It's great. Especially the random lines with the penguin and the tundra - good poetic lines in and of themselves, perfect humor in the poem.
The line about punctuation was excellent. Hard on the eyes of an editorial type, but very funny - what are the "~" things used for, anyways?
The final two lines didn't quite fit with the poem - but all things considered, it's fine. Great poem!
...just, seriously? Don't really do that.