(just experimenting with structure here, so please look at it objectively 
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Cut me with your silence!
...
Sharper than any word could be polished to.
You used to speak with me a lot; now never.
I see you occasionally in the hallways of our school, passing glances.
That -
Bore-
In-
To-
Me-
Why?
Just a look, with no malice or hate... Just a look.
I'd give anything for an insult, something. Anything...
Say something to me.
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Very well done, I love the way you're showing that being ignored by the person you love can hurt more than having them insult you.
Please write more
Hello there! I love new ideas, so let's see how yours turns out, eh?
Very intriguing. I think the breaks worked out nicely, accenting each word. And I can see what you're saying. It's like a comment on a very human reaction. Let's just say I'm feeling it, my friend.
Well done!
--Anna
'ello
I haven't ever seen a poem set up like this, or anything really like this actually so good job for being unique
As for the actual poem it was alright I think. Yeah its about a sad lonely person who wants attention from a certain someone but this leaves me craving more information about the situation. if you polished it up a bit more then it would really be a good poem!