Lama Tian Na...
Incense rising, plooms of mantra.
Taking flight with dusty wings,
I soar through my primal thoughts.
Om mae mae om...
Arcane verses, repeated - eternal.
Muttered with incandescent tounges,
filling the air with dulcet tones.
Siddham...
Perfection.
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Ty Angel ^^ you do dote on my ego so *blushes*.
Hello kris!
Ugh it seems as though I don't read enough of your work. I actually like this. I love the way it was cultured and the words flowed well and it was short and sweet and beautiful, as always.
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May I give you a gold star?
Good job!
Ta,
~Angel
Hm...this was short, but at the same time, it was quite nice. I think if it was a little longer, it could have been better.
Anyway, this wasn't bad at all. Good work.