Hey dogs,
"Everyone is buying their precious gold."- beautiful line!!! I like the way you start your poem. The theme behind this piece of your work is wonderful. Personally I'm a little amazed by the way you can put so much meaning behind simple words. I love the way your poem flows and the end is really amazing.
"That the world can be a bad place to live."
I guess "the world is a bad place to love" would have flown better( just saying!)
Anyway_Great poem. Amazing start. Beautiful ending. Everything about it is good.
Cold hearted-smart choice of words( for a tittle)
Never quit writing
Fangirl~
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