Hey! MapleWay here dropping by with a quick review!
Wow. This poem was deep. Amazing. Very good job. I'm a huge fan of metaphors and the fact that you used one in this poem makes me like it even more. Also, great idea to do all bold it makes the words stick out more and makes the poem overall more dramatic. Great decision. My favorite part would have to be the ending note. It is so intense and is honestly very sad. But sometimes that makes poems beautiful in a way.
Anyways great job!
- Maple
Points: 18
Reviews: 93
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