The Stories~Random Genres and Stories

by Pinkiegirl13

Published June 14, 2014

16+ Language Violence Mature Content

In Name a character

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language, violence, and mature content.

The Girl Who Walks In the Dark

In midnight, a teen couple, Jean and Peter, were walking home from their amazing date. They laughed at their silly jokes and have a great conversation. They don't want their night to end so soon so they think a idea to spend a great time together.

"Hey, Peter?" said Jean.

"Yes, Jean?" said Peter.

"Let's look at the stars!" Jean smiled happily.

Peter smiled back. "Ok."

Jean kissed him on the cheek and ran to the tall, oak tree. She turned around and smiled at Peter who gave her a smile back. Then, she climbed up the tree. However, Peter didn't really love Jean. He just using her to get the thing he needs: money. Once, he cheated on her with a girl named Megan. Megan was a sweet girl who thought he was the one until she found out that he have another. They went to the argument before she went missing and found dead.

Finally, Peter climbed up with her. They looked at the stars shooting across the sky. Jean leaned her head to his shoulder to see his blue eyes. Then, Peter meets her green eyes.

"I love you, Peter," said Jean as she gave him a gently smile.

"I love you, too," Peter lied.

Jean reached her head to his head and bring him to a passion kiss. While they are making out, there was a girl who was walking along the street. Her legs were wiggling around as she walked. Her black hair has dirty and seaweed on it. Her face was not revealed because her head is tilting forward. Her clothes was bloody like red. When Jean and Peter stopped kissing, they saw her walking pass them . Her walking was very odd. Jean was worried for her while Peter wasn't.

"Peter, what is wrong with girl? She acted so odd..." questioned Jean.

"Eh. Maybe she's drunk or something." replied Peter.

"Well, I don't. Come on, we are going to help her," said Jean before she climbed down the tree.

"Oh, give me a break..." mumbled Peter.

As Jean followed the girl, she heard crying from the walking girl. It sounded so sad, raspy, and kinda normal.

"Hello? Miss, do you need her? I can call my mom to pick you up," said Jean.

The girl stopped crying. She stopped walking and turned her head. "No...I don't need anyone. Leave me alone....or I'll kill you."

The girl turned her head for forward and keep on walking. Jean still didn't leave her alone.

"Please, you need help. I don't want you to go one in these dangerous streets. Please, let me-" Jean got cut off by the girl who had stabbed her on the stomach with full speed. She stared at the girl's eyes. Her eyes was red and lifeless, and her face looked like Megan. It is Megan! Jean slowly closed her eyes as Megan pulled out the knife. Then, Peter was standing there with fear in this eyes. Megan smiled at him as she cleaned her knife with her shirt.

"I am coming for you, Peter..." said Megan in a singing tone.

"No! I killed you! I fucking killed you! I am not going to die, you slut! You are dead, not alive!" yelled Peter.

"Well, I guess you're wrong. Now you die!" Megan laughed.

Peter ran away as her evil laughter went down the street. He didn't looked back or stopped for air. He then get memories of Megan. He remembered he murdered her by cut her throat with a knife and hid it from the polices. His tears streamed down as his guilty was taking over his body. He tried and tried to forget it, but it kept on replaying it over and over again.

After a hour of running for dear life, Peter saw his house across the street. He was relieved that it was over. No more Megan. No more guilty feelings. When he about to cross the street, he was held back by Megan. He tried to get away from her, but her grip was stronger than his. Then, he decided to scream.

"Help, someone, help!" screamed Peter.

Megan raised the knife and said, "Bye bye!"

Then, the scene flashed black.

Last night, two bodies found in different streets. One was stabbed in the stomach and the another has his throat cut. They were a teen couple on the night of the murder. Polices don't know who is the suspect of these murders so the case is untold. Their families will pray for their children who didn't make it. This is Grace and these are your news.

Drunk You + me= Love

During a party, everyone was having a good time. People were drinking whatever they want and have sex with any person they like. There was Erica who is shy person in the party. Her friend, Missy, invited her to get laid because, you know, she always get laid. However, Erica don't want a guy to fuck with. She wants a man who loves her for her, not for sex. And she knows that these guys don't want a girl like her. Maybe she will never find love until she saw her friend, Ryan, who was dancing drunk. They first met in the neighborhood when he moved in. He was a nice guy. He always nice to her, and made her felt safe. Also, he's also a gamer. He have a hot voice and made a lot of funny videos. That's why she like him. But she don't know he like her. Well, it will never happen because he wants us to be friends. Then, Ryan came to her.

"Hey, Erica. Can you take me to the room over there?" asked Ryan as he pointed at the room on the left.

"Sure, no problem," Erica replied.

Erica got up and walked him to the room. She opened the door and take Ryan with her. She then put him to the door and closed the door.

"Okay, I got you in the room. Now, see ya."

Erica turned to leave the room. However, Ryan grabbed her arm and pulled her to his face. Then, the scene blacked out. Finally, the scene flashed back and showed they are kissing. Erica was surprised while Ryan closed his eyes in pleasure.

"Ryan...?" mumbled Erica in surprise.

Erica pulled back off of him, but she can't get out of his grip.

"Ryan...what are you doing? We're friends, you know that. I know you are not ready," said Erica.

"Erica, you are the beautiful woman that I had my eyes on all years," said Ryan in his hot voice.

Erica was shocked.

Did he...did he say I am beautiful, Erica thought.

"I was in love with you so long. You're prefect. Your personalities, your body, and everything...is prefect. I...I love you." Ryan blushed when he say that to her. Erica also blushes.

"I...I love you..too," Erica said as her cheeks stringed red.

They leaned into a kiss as the scene zoomed away from the couple. This morning, everyone was passed out of partying. In the room, Ryan and Erica was naked in the bed together. They were cuddling together. We were drunk in love that night. Erica looked at sleeping Ryan with her smile.

"Oh, Ryan~" said Erica.

Ryan woke up and saw him and Erica was naked in bed. He looked confused and shocked.

"What the fuck just happen?!" yelled Ryan.

We're found by them

In the dark shelter, my family and I hided from the Nazis when they were looking for us. We were scared of being found and sent to camp away from my family. I will miss them dearly including my daughter, Wendy. She is the only person that I always love until I die. Then, we heard footsteps coming this way. We held each other and pray for our soul. Then, the door was slammed by the Nazi polices. We were found by them with their guns pointing at us.

Cry Says

Vera always like Cry(from Youtube). He saved her from his personalities, made her laugh, and listen to her problems. She missed him dearly and wished the fairies won't let him forget. She cried in her hands for disappointment. Then, she heard a voice that sound like him.

"Hey, why you crying?"

Vera got excited a little bit. "Ryan Terry(I am so sorry for that), is that you?" said Vera.

"No, it's me! The Sup guy!" the little white figure jumped on her knee. It had a face palm face and don't have any arms. Vera got upset again.

"Oh...hi..."

"Sup?" said the Sup guy.

"What are you doing here?" asked Vera.

"Well, I know you are in love with Cry. I just want to see you to tell you something what he say to you before he became brainwash. He says: He love you very much. You kicked ass and so amazing to be with. You made his day with adventures and fun. He like to play games with you after we save the world. Love, Cry," said Sup guy.

Vera wiped her eyes and smiled. "He really said that?"

"Yup."

Vera grabbed him and rubbed her head to his. "Thank you, man!"

"Sure thang(don't tell to correct it. That what he say), friend."

After the Sup guy left, Vera dialed Ryan(or Cry)'s number and it rang. For fifth rings, he answered.

"Hello?" said Ryan.

"Hi, this is Stephanie's sister, Vera..."

Ok, I am done. Or am I? Whatever. See ya

Comments & reviews · 2
SecreteJournalist wrote a review Review · Jun 14, 2014

Hey! SecreteJournalist here for a review. I'm gonna go through nit picks first, hope ya don't mind!

They laughed at their silly jokes and have a great conversation.

The readers would LOVE more dialogue here. And also, it's had, not have.


Jean kissed him on the cheek and ran to the tall, oak tree.

No need for the comma. What does Jean look like? What does Peter look like? Where exactly are they? Imagery is lacking in this.


She turned around and smiled at Peter who gave her a smile back. Then, she climbed up the tree.

This could all be made into one sentence!


They went to the argument before she went missing and found dead.

It should be 'They got into an argument before she went missing and was found dead'. Also, this progresses really fast. The readers could of waited longer to know Peter didn't love Jena.

I'd nit-pick more, but that'd be an over-sized review. All this needs is a wee bit more grammar, spell-check, and imagery, and it'd be a gem among the literary works (: I do like how you have more than one short story, it keeps the readers interested without becoming bored. Keep writing, I'd love to read more(:

Yours truly,
SecreteJournalist
AKA
Brie

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KingLucifer wrote a review Review · Jun 14, 2014

I am Avalon, and I'll be your reviewer for this work.

My first problem with this work: Focus. When I say "Focus" I mean focus on one story, "The Girl Who Walks In the Dark" could have easily done it all on it's own. Only with more detail and even including the scene with Peter murdering Megan for the opening. It's easily the best story out of the this section of stories in my opinion and I would love to see it expanded upon.

My second problem with this work: "We're found by them" I honestly can't call this a short story because it is only a single paragraph. But from what I gather it takes place during World War 2, Nazi Germany and a mother and a group of others are hiding and then they've been found. Nothing more than that and you could have expanded upon this by how they were found, like the first I would like to see this expanded upon.

My third and final problem with this work: "Cry Says." This seems like the most pointless story out of this collection. My main reason being it just seems like a typical teen romance deal. There isn't much to make of Vera since the only thing we know about her is that she likes a youtuber named Cry. Due to this, there is no pull to say "awww!" by the end because we simply don't really know her. Maybe if you went on with the story so we could get to know her better then by the end we might feel sympathy for her, but that's just about it.

Now for the positive aspect of this work, Peter is easily the best character of this work. There a greedy bastard who's killed to shut a woman up from telling his current money source about him cheating. Him seeing Megan killing his current girlfriend and the way he reacts, it's believable in my opinion and that's why he's the best character in this work.

Dude, I did this one for fun. It is my lazy day so I don't have to. Also, Vera is my character from my story Sidney's Children Meets Youtube. I will finish the show it on the story. Don't have to be like my teacher, dude
So stop killing my vibe.



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