Wolf, Wolf, gazing high
Looking into the endless sky
Howl, Howl
At the moon
Praising the spirits up above
Death is the only price higher than love
When its time to leave, She stands
A lone Wolf in the vast lands
She walks away from Her pack
She walks away and never looks back...
*
Forging through the wind and rain
Trying to forget Her pains
Pushing on, wishing, crying
Screaming as if She were dying
Battling the fears within
Just so She can reach the end
Yet still She continues on
Hoping for tomorrows sun
*
Owls calling to the moon
Flying
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To touch the sky
Little Wolf
Howling still
Waiting for the sun to rise
With soft touch and gentle heart
Watch as the light lifts the dark
Through foggy minds and clouded ears
The rays of sun begin to appear
*
And they touch the lonely Wolf
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Hello!
I only have a couple of nitpicks... 
This is WONDERFUL! I love it!
I like the way you repeat "she walks away", but I think you should kind of 'trail off' on that last line. You could do this by adding some punctuation. Example:
"She walks away from Her pack
She walks away and never looks back..."
Of course that's your choice - you are the author of course!
Other than that, I really like this! Especially that last line-
I love how it's separated from all the rest!
~Snazzy, Pencil, Penicillin, etc.
Stay awesome!
Thanks for the excellent review! I think you are right about the punctuation, and I may go back to add it. Have a nice day!
BEAUTIFUL!
Thanks!
Hi Felistia here with a review.
Oh my goodness, I love this poem. It is so moving and full of interesting words. I love that it is about a wolf. I really like wolves. I am not sure why you kept on capitalizing she and her while other times you don't. I really like the ending it is very satisfying. There is a lot of good descriptions in here and I am a big fan on descriptive poems, so well done and I look forward to more of your work.
Thank you so much!