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Behind my eyes

by ImHero


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Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:22 pm
Hanorah wrote a review...



Hello Imhero!
I'm hanorah and I'll be reviewing another one of your poems this review day,your a great poet!
I loved this poem as well, it was brilliant capitalising was perfect, it was put in stanzas, and it flowed throughout, well done.
My constructive critism is the same as the last time: you should use more punctuation, but apart from that it was great.Nice work!
~Keep writing




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Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:18 am
brittbritt12347 wrote a review...



Hello brittany here to review you.
I like the way it flows and rhymes. :) Fantastic job on that.
I also can see what you are saying so good job on the imagery.
Honestly I would give you a definite 5 of 5 if I was to rate you.
I feel as if I can relate to you in this poem and like Im really there and it is happening to me.
Well goodnight and be safe.

Happy writing!




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Mon Oct 22, 2012 1:19 am
goldenrebel wrote a review...



Your poem was very mellow and made me feel joyful. I enjoyed the smoothness and your transition from line to line. You chose your words wisely and if I could I would give it a 4.5/5.





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