Hey Aley, I'm upset that I can't review this - because honestly I just have no suggestions on how to make it better. Maybe do that interesting 'visual poetry' part again? The pad in the sand part? Because once I understood that I thought it was neat
You did a great job, I wouldn't have had the willpower to get it right It's really cool. Kudos!
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