Hello,
this poem is great. You did a great job at using imagery to help the reader feel like they were lost at sea. You also did a great job finding perfect rhyming words. I always have trouble finding good rhymes, it's really hard. You have a true talent!
I also like how you spaced out the world drifting at the end of the poem, like the words are drifting away and also becoming lost at sea.
this is a great poem
keep writing!
-Ang920
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