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Locked Shy?SHY? WHY?Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:40 pm -
I try to pretend, I try to stay away, But the more that I try, The more I make mistakes. You are th…Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:44 am -

Well this is called a Shakespearian Sonnet and its suppose to express emotions. So I hope you all l…Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:49 pm -

This poems getting published in a book! Hope you like it as much as the judges did! I thought you w…Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:32 pm -

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i worked really super hard on this poem and all my friends think its amazing. i hope you think so t…Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:10 am -

Shades of Silver fall from the sky Majesty of nature, so fluff & so dry I bury my face in the Abyss…Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:02 am -

My day is gone The waves are long My heart is in love today The life I hear Is not so dear It’s har…Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:32 pm -

A/N: I'm a fan of the first verse, but the rest of them... bleh. Any suggestions? A silver lining G…Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:34 am -
sooo this is only my second poem I've submitted, I know it needs a lot of work, and a better ending…Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:46 pm -

Well I have been here for a while, but never really posted anything until now, so hello everyone! Y…Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:25 pm -

Missing You You told me not that you were leaving, You told me not of what I wanted to hear, You si…Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:23 pm -

Ok, I know this is fairly long and im not sure if this is the right place to put it but bare with m…Wed Oct 14, 2009 9:48 pm -

This is a sonnet that is part of a 7-sonnet "mini-epic" about different aspects of life. This one i…Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:28 pm -

Angry as robbed bees, and a savage flutter, shapeless anxiety climbing the crest; honey clinging to…Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:10 pm -

This is one of my best poems. I hope you like it. I won a poetry competition in my school for it. P…Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:36 pm -

Here's the next poem in a kind of series of poems that I'm writing... A storm is coming, You can se…Mon Oct 12, 2009 6:59 pm -

Please review this. It needs a better title.Sun Oct 11, 2009 4:14 am -

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(Yes the commas are supposed to be here, please pause at each one. I shouldn't have to tell anyone …Sat Oct 10, 2009 12:20 am -

Wind It has swept across the world, flattening helpless blades of grass, pushing the monstrous clou…Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:14 pm -

Locked StargazerShe stares off Seeming to see beyond our reality She is a dreamer She is a stargazer I am a dreamer…Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:34 pm -

My first proper poemThu Oct 08, 2009 9:37 pm -

Another sappy poemTue Oct 06, 2009 4:45 am -

I"m generating a lot of poems in 30 seconds this month =_= And it's awful because I can't post anyt…Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:32 am -

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Trudging the paths of solitudeTue Oct 06, 2009 4:13 am -

everything about me depends on you. this is something that haunts me long into the sleepless nights…Tue Oct 06, 2009 2:36 am -

Another piece of yesterday is gone A good looking face in an old photograph but life marches on. Ta…Mon Oct 05, 2009 11:27 pm -

You’re the top for my bottom that doesn’t quite fit You feel like soft cotton with an iron tip. You…Mon Oct 05, 2009 3:16 pm -
could you see what I see I see things that are not meant to be close,far I see them a lie And somet…Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:56 pm -

here's a more polished product...thanks all for the reviews. CL -----------------------------------…Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:16 am -
When all of life is darkness, And I can't find a glimpse of light, When troubles seem unending, And…Fri Oct 02, 2009 10:24 pm -

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This World Drifting, my mind waivers through reality It’s cold out here. In our world, time waits f…Thu Oct 01, 2009 2:08 pm -

Hi guys.... I made a poem which is similar to the prayer of the 21st century by john marsden but my…Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:40 pm -

As they told me, black and sudden, a spider appeared on the wall. I leapt up, trembling.Mon Sep 28, 2009 10:06 pm -

I wrote this earlier in a few minutes for some fun. Not the best poem in the world and not the best…Mon Sep 28, 2009 1:49 am -

Fear. Like a Snake That creeps across The grass. Scared. Like a Kid On his first Rollercoaster. Ter…Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:08 pm -
A song that you must be nice to because i love it...Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:50 am -

The seasons alter our behaviour From when were seeds until when we are sprung, But golden leaves st…Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:47 pm -

* something I'd probably want to hear from a man :P Playing Cliches I won’t promise you the moon, i…Tue Sep 22, 2009 2:53 pm -

Well I wrote this for my Mom. I'm giving it to her for her birthday. Let me know what you think. I …Tue Sep 22, 2009 2:44 pm -

When did this life become so pointless Please let me know Where is my ambition What happened to my …Tue Sep 22, 2009 3:56 am -

It's in the way you make me smile. It's in the way you call my name. Being forlorn is now impossibl…Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:02 pm -

Hands move smooth when face is young on the hour chimes are sung happy songs of play and race set t…Sun Sep 20, 2009 6:06 pm -

This was written in a dash for a friend who needed to cram a poem and was unable to.XD So it is rou…Sat Sep 19, 2009 5:48 pm -
Ulterior motives of the mind, to give in, to consider it all wrong. But really the mirror reflects …Sat Sep 19, 2009 4:14 pm -

I have never... touched a cloud, avoided deceit, seen God's face, or raised a family. _ I have neve…Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:43 pm -

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