First of all, This poem is horrible.. It only has one word. Second, Can a mod lock this or even better, delete it? It is just someone's alt (mage_bank) trying to be funny after getting kicked from chat.
"When then going gets weird, the weird turn Pro."- Hunter S. Thompson
"when all else fails and you can't extend a story, Ingest large amounts of hallucinogens or create a long lost brother" -- Zerkk
The fact that the word "shy" rhymes with the word "why" is in and of itself an anomaly. The usage of uppercase further conveys a rather personal undertone of self doubt. The poet is clearly attempting to convince himself that there is no point to remaining shy when he in fact knows that he is inevitably will stay shy. The poem is a last resort that is a desperate attempt to show his true courage.
The use of uppercase underlines his failure. Have a great one!
#TNT
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, And miles to go before I sleep, And miles to go before I sleep. -- Robert Frost
There forums are made for works that you wish to recieve critiques on. A word is impossible to critique; try including this word in a poem of some sort, and try again. For now, this is locked; please take posting on YWS more seriously.
- June
"I'd steal somebody's purse if I could google it and then download it." -- Firestarter
