That was so good! Totally awesome and like so... emotional! I would cry writing that even though I am sure ou probably didn't. Anywho, enough of my random rambling! About this, nothing bad to say to be honest. I liked it and that is that.
He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night. — Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart