Hotel Room /P

by Incandescence

Published November 16, 2005

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Emma
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Emma commented Comment · Nov 16, 2005

Lmao very good. I don't like the beginning when you repeat the 'or's' but that is probably just your style. Did this actually happen or did you just make it up?

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Duskglimmer
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Duskglimmer commented Comment · Nov 16, 2005

I have to say, I never thought that unlocking a door could take so much effort... but this made me smile. I could have done without the swearing myself, but it wasn't badly over done... nice job...

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Elizabeth
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Elizabeth wrote a review Review · Nov 16, 2005

Hahaha... If this happened then I feel so sorry for your mother... But JESUS if it doesn't open
*falls over laughing*

For once in your life you haven't PM'd me to read this, maybe it's that new...

But this was very interesting, very short, simple, very Brad, espcially the use of cursing where there COULD have been replacements....



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