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Legendary. *laughs again* I love this whole story, it's so amusing.
Kyle and Ariel? *gasp*
This is getting so good. Personally I think Pros. is amazing. Disturbing is like the Earth's misplaced halo. Everyone's drawn to it whether they'll admit it or not. XD. That actually makes sense in my own little way. Great job.
Edit 5/6/07 - XD, this is getting funnier and funnier. Sort of scary, I hope this isn't your future *gasp*. But, hilarious all the same. Imagining you as a pink marshmallow in front of a laptop was sort of hard but eventually I had an idea of what you'd look like *shudders*. And I'd want to see the miny Brad, a little version of you running around XD. Can't wait for the next Brad!
~Rieda
You're really quick. Tis becoming wonderful Brad. I love your first person writing. Very different from Pros. and Ch. and yet so appealing. Great Job!
~Rieda
*sigh* Besides the coke, this really makes me want to suceed as a writer! This is really good so far! I love the fame and the drugs and everything! Lol, I didn't even expect it to turn out like this, but I'm loving it. Tell me when the next is posted!
~Rieda
something that according to the New York Times had become "bizarrely complicated...bloated and trivial...hyped-up," and I didn't necessarily disagree
. Still great word usage, and something your fans can really relate to. Lol, great job so far! Tell me when you've written the next.
**XD, hehe, I love this so far. It's very Brad of you
~Rieda