I have to say, the description was the first thing that caught my attention. I love it when a writer makes the setting real to me. And I must say, you have a way with words that makes me jealous.
The characters are great. Dialog in this piece is quite nice. And I must agree with Caligula's Launderette, the part about talking with his hands made me laugh, especially since my mom always tells me that if someone tied my hands behind my back, I couldn't hold a conversation.
I'm looking forward to the rest!
Haley
Points: 890
Reviews: 104
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