0₩0 dear satan why is your poetry so good and delightfully written.
I LOVE this poem from start to finish. My mind is wandering but I totally agree with this part of @Pompadour 's review:
"your concept is concrete, the emotion carries through well, and your imagery is solid; the poem's also constant in keeping with the birds/flight images. wings are a really solid metaphor for what you're going for here--artistic rejuvenation, self-care, etc.--and to me the poem served both as a response to a person [friend? lover? family?] as well as to the general doubt that people tend to express towards art//self-care, which is often seen as selfish. i'd like to conjecture that the piece can be seen as having been aimed at oneself, too, but the tone suggests otherwise. the distinctions between 'me' and 'you' are very obvious. the only place the lines are blurred would be in stanza two: the poet speaks of how their 'heartbeat ...[will shake] /your/ ribcage awake'. while i interpreted this as being taken to mean that the poet's writing--their thoughts, feelings, and emotions, will awaken the addressee aesthetically, it contradicted the idea that the poet is investing into themself. while poetry does seek to awaken thoughts and ideas, i think the idea the poet meant to articulate was that they were entering a self-awakening? the way this section is structured creates confusion, but i'll get back to this point later."(Again Pomp's words not mine)
ANYWayS I can say for sure that I have no complaints with this poem. I loved it marmssss staahp giving me good thoughts and warm feelings like cocoa and a blanket and movie on a cold winter day
Your buddy,
~ Em
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