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Hello!!
I absolutely and most definitely loved your poem! You've immediately captivated my eyes, heart, and attention. I admire your choice of words and technique as well. Also, I liked the way you chose to tell a story, a tale that is very evident. Your work made me ponder about the significance of love and all the feelings associated with it.
It made me think about a lot of things actually. Your work is simply beautiful. More to come!!
Thanks for sharing this poem about a very special feeling which emerges whenever we feel that we have found the special someone we have been searching for all our life. Such moments are truly special and you are blessed to have experienced it. Some of us never really do. The poem very nicely conveys the specialness of such a moment via vivid imagery and other poetic means.
I especially like how the poem ends with the declaration that sparks and butterflies were found to be true. Also, how brown eyes stared into blue. The way that a conversation seems to indicate that the ones conversing are indeed kindred souls who have finally converged as if by destiny. Overall a very well-written poem which touches something deeply meaningful.
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Normally I would insist on punctuation if the lack of it interfered in some way with the poem's flow or meaning. But in this case, my reading and understanding were not impeded in the least. So poetic license is OK. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Hi I am Ishan212 and I am here to review your poem
fairytales
So here we go.
I had to review , reading the promo.
A bit of a capitalisation might help make it better, the "fairy tales were just stories by lonely authors" was the line that caught my eye.
What makes you write that fairy tales are written by lonely authors? I think of them to be people with great sense of humour and the ones who can make friends with people very easily?
The prophecies line was also good and it added to the overall beauty of the poem.
It could have been a bit more formatted.
Thanks
Keep Writing!!!
Fantastic Poem!!!
Ishan