Hello, this is LadyShadows here to review what you have!
This is a very short, yet sweet poem. I can picture a warm Tuesday morning in April while it rains. I can see and even smell the rain as well. However, as much as I really liked this poem, to me it doesn't have as much flow as it should. Like any other form of art, poetry kind of needs that special "blending" of its own paint. The paint is the words of course, and blending them together to make a rhythm is a good thing to do. Sometimes when it's a free verse poem the flow isn't looked at or necessary but it's still nice to have. Keep writing! You're going places.
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