There is an amazing concept behind this poem! I really like how you expressed different perspectives and found a way to make that "shapeshift" work wonderfully. There is nothing about this poem that I would fix, I think it is written very well in your own style. I would add a period after "snares" but that is just a simple punctuation mistake. This poem would have to be the most unique or outstanding poem I've read in a long while. Keep up the amazing work! There is some true talent here!
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