I like the idea of flying in your dreams, I have always wanted to fly like a bird with wings of feathers high where noone can reach.This piece is really outstanding and shows you have alot of potential.
This was very good! I think it was an amazing peice of work. The rythym was clear and so were the words and the defenitions that you meant for them to have! Very good job!
This is a story about a girl
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world.
In every single letter. In every single word. There will be a hidden message about a boy who loves a girl.
LOL I agree with you! he made a reasonably good review! There must be something wrong...
Anyway, I liked it. I think you described it well because I think (and this is what i think you meant) you also mentioned dreaming. And the might, I totally disagree with however said it should be something else, because when you're sleeping you can't be sure if you'll have a nice dream (where you could free yourself from reality and fly away) or if you'll have a bad dream that will pursue through the rest of the night. Anyway I liked it and that's all i have to say
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
