a song?

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i don't know what to call it so if you come up with something, just leave it in your comment...



[v1] I'm gonna miss you
Even though I kind of already do
I loved you so much
But it never seemed to be enough
Ignoring me won't work
I'll stay, but my heart will have more hurt

[v2] What's up? Oh, nothing much
I just miss you a whole lot
Been thinking about you
You are always on my mind
I've heard you hate me, is it true?
I thought I'd get it this time

[c] Everyone wanted us together
Now my only chance is never
I don't know how to move on
It'll be a long time
Until you're out of my mind
And I'm over you
I'm gonna miss you
Even though I kind of already do

[v3] True, you're older than me
And yes, we live kind of far apart
But we can make it work, definetly
I never thought it would be this hard
If only you gave me a chance
Like that one time I asked you to dance
But you said no

[c]

[b] Soon, really soon, it'll be all over
And I won't ever see you again
But you can change that
I don't want to grow apart
Keep in touch
I always will love and miss you much
When you get home, look up the song
A Little Too Not Over You, by David Archuleta
It's my theme song for you, like a long love letter

[c x2]




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oh I like this honestly, I really like this it's powerful orginal, I think it could use a better title though like something below

Together For Never

Together

Without You

Missing You

I don't know something like it, the song was great and I could imagine a sot of hippie with an acustic guitar sitting in the grass and singing it, (sorry my imgaination is dull) anyways this was a great song, if you have any questions or comments go ahead and PM me.

-Max
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™




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ok, I really like this as a song. I just wish I could have heard the beat, because without it it seems more like a poem than a song. (Sorry, That`s just how my brain works)

I also think a great tittle for this song would be

Out of my mind

or like max said

"together for never"

I would go with "together for never", it has a nice ring to it.
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