Wow !!!!!
what a relatable poem... It highlights the vicious cycle of life and the impermanence of materialistic joys around us ..... This temporary happiness reflects that we alway have something to loose when we claim something is ours ..... Loss ,sorrow and suffering goes hand in hand with joy, prosperity success and achievements ..... Your poems speaks for the whole of humanity as this is the ultimate universal truth Humans suffer from the ravages of time and the void created by the temporary happiness, which all leads to the torment and anguish .......
Your poem must be taught to the youth as they are the most sensitive and vulnerable during extreme changes .....
You have done an excellent job on the theme "grim reality of happiness "
looking forward for more worthwhile poems
cheers!!!!
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