Young Writers Society

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I love this poem because it has such a metaphorical meaning, and it shows how there are so many liars and cheats in the world who jump the hard work and dedication necessary for success or whatever it is you want. Just like the reviewer before said, it represents how if you want something, you have to fight for it (unfortunately, of course, we shouldn't have to fight for what we want but that's a whole other thing.) I also loved the rhyming and in a way a kind of sweet ending, it seems like such a kind ending and you can see how the narrator grows and finally understands their mistake and is willing to try again. My favourite line was:

Marks hold importance - I realised

Not the evaluated answers the society sees

But the honesty that should be analysed

To have all emotions that make you feel like a clot

Its a nice and incised poem i will say. Many don't know the real essence of a thing, not until importance and regrets of the their actions begin to dawn on them.
Once again, i recommend the poem but its a kind of whisky but nevertheless wont stop my review. It is true that real and actual mark comes In handy with excellence and competent hard work than we could imagine.
I remember them in my secondary school, when I will have to watch cheaters cheat, yet it felt hard form to cheat as a well, so I just maintained myself but that didn't last long enough. Even though I usually lead the class, yet I was afraid that my marks would drop as those loathers seemed to be heightening their scores and one day I gave in. Didn't like it I would say, but I still left the class.
In the case of this classic poem, I would say that whatever true mark one wishes to get doesn't just come like that, but we 'll have to fight for it anyways and that's what we 'll do.
Man tend to fail because they do not realize the importance of the marks scores they are to obtain anyways they just st see it as a usual thing.
Its not really bad if we out cheating to pass, but it becomes bad and then you do that for the second time and that's sheer manipulation of score.
I seem to so much like the zeal exerted in the last stanza because one must do anything possible to pass and determination is a goal.