Back again with a review, the poem was really touching and sad. I felt like crying when reading it. The way it is constructed is really good.I was really touched by stanza 4 last line cause it is something i went through once, what she went through was really sad and many do not make it they just can not take it no more.As a community we are quick to judge why she or he committed suicide without knowing their story.So in my point of view i feel like this poem shedding some light or showing people that do not judge before you really know what they went through. Well to me that how i saw the poem and i really loved a lot, whoah the rhyming i do not know what to say it, it is linking, connecting and flowing i love the rhythm of the poem. One favor please teach me how make my poem rhyme like how yours is rhyming:).
Points: 336
Reviews: 8
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