Hi TahaT11n, acm here for a short review! I know how hard making good haikus are, so I can understand what you were talking about in your summary. The thing to remember about haikus is that the first line has five syllables, the second has seven, and the third line had five again. That's just something you might want to look for when you're editing. Other than that, I thought you have great haikus. Keep working!
-acm
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