Hey this is Thesky or (Sky)
In the first one
"1.Dogs' Laugh..(the title)
They barked and barked and
when they laughed they laughed like us
But I heard them bark"
This to me does not make sense I see that your trying to say something but I just don't get this one.
In the third one
"3.
sound box lying unplugged
the paused title "Rain"- a sad song
being played inside brain"
I didn't get tips either and wher it says a sad song being played inside brain it doesn't sound right
I think maybe you should read this over but it is really good.
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