Hey Taha, nice stuff here! I'm super tired here on my side of the planet, as it's kinda late, and I can't really string too many coherent thoughts together right now, so I'll just put down a load of my opinions down. Tell me if you want or need more info, ok? And don't feel that you're bothering me or anyone else by asking for our opinions. We here all WANT to help (really, why would we join this site and not somewhere geared more to only putting the stories out there if we didn't want to give our opinions and provide aid)?
Ok, now onto more real stuff. I think I like the "sings +teenage" version best. I like it because it is very descriptive, and I prefer it over smiles because singing seems more triumphant. Kind of like telling the world something like " Hey! World! Nice try, but I am still alive here! Booyah, in your face!" or singing your happiness out to the world because life threw you a really tough punch, and you still managed to shake it off, and keep moving on with a smile on your face. The "smile" one seems more peaceful, like something happened, and they went through a lot of inner turmoil over whether or not to use the noose, but they eventually came to a decision and are at peace with it. Or at least, these things are how I see it.
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