Hi,
Taha... This is your first haiku poem that I just read.
Firstly, I love how the poem is being flowing. This haiku for me a really ironic and sad one. It symbolized something... like ironic? such as a unrequited love... or something like that? It is telling me something like life goes on.
The use of cicada as the main thing here is concrete. It brings me images of greenness, a calm place.
Let me end this already (not because I am lazy or hate you or what) because I think, if a haiku is to be clarified, it will be like way too long.
I will end this with an OST from one of my favorite game. I found it suits this haiku along with the message you try to convey.
Let butterflies spread until the dawn.
Keep writing~!
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