I bang my head slowly on my books
Dear Chemistry and Physics don't feel good
It's really hot here, in my room
What's worse is, I am stressed in boredom.
My hopes are drying up like lake in summer
If it rained, it might feel better
But there's no cloud lining up in the sky
I bet, a cicada, like me, is trying to cry.
The door is closed and the window open
Curtains are blown to the left
On the right side, my table
Where I have bent down my head.
A schedule paper hanging
On the front wall
Exam times and targets and club works.
I'm tired of staring there
Already too tired.
Need a sherbet of lemon
But, Ryu won't come home ever.
The cook-Stew won't cook here.
A Pilot is somewhere flying her paper plane.
A Shadow might be trying to get lights.
Dear Rine must be rhyming or reading at this time.
A Tim has gone somewhere- where?
It's not time to write Rough E's either.
Urban legend has broken her legs.
Kitkat shouldn't be eaten, I hope she's doing great.
A Lilly must be befriending a Tiger.
Suri has got to be busy with exams.
Lovebooks should be reading lovely stuffs.
Star most probably is not eating Asian.
And I , the eternal Teen, bite my time and tongue.
( I hope I can do well in the exam. Although, I can't study due to mental fatigue)
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Super cool
All the best for the exams.
*My plaster and cruches have become my second leg now ^-^
exam shesh. allah bachaiche.
Don't mind a suggestion.
The title would sound better if it'd be "Sudden poetry comes out of boredom and stress" or "Boredom and stress cause a sudden poetry"
Ha ha, thanks for the suggestion, but I like it this way
Ha! This is relatable, lol It rambles, but in a tasteful way, and has good alliteration. Excellent use of homophones, I think. ^^ This poem has great imagery, and captures the sense of boredom and desperation well, haha
Thanks,
~Joelsweet
This is awesome! And all the best for exams!
I like the poem and I think it is relatable for most of us who had had a test week or just too much stress from it all.I do not get how teachers think we can do it all when they can not check one exam after two weeks break.
Seriously.Anyways,back to the poetry of yours.It is good really and I hope you do well with your exams.Not only but everyone else who has the hard time.
All of that is how I feel about college. Constant studying and trying to get things in on time. Books, homework, papers, teachers, projects all crammed into a week. AHHHHHHHH!!!! My head is pounding just thinking about it. Wanting to do everything else but what you are actually supposed to be doing. I am rambling.
Review time (kind of): I love the poem. There needs to be more of these out there so other students can relate and feel better about the exams and school altogether. I don't think I have seen any mistakes or errors, if I did. FIX THEM! JK....
keepwritingright
Thanks for the review.
And, I wasn't actually trying to relate to other students. It was only about how i was feeling and what i was doing and what i was thinking.
This is a good poem and it really captures the frustration that all students go through when state testing time rolls around. I am sure that you will do good.
I like how you compared your hopes to a lake drying up in summer. I am sorry if this review doesn't help but I just feel like writing a positive one right now.
You are good at writing and I am looking forward to checking out your profil\e to see all of your beautiful poetry. Good luck on those tests! Summer will be here before you know it.
- Anne Throckmorton
Thank you so much.
But, I am sorry I might not be able to fulfill your expectations. cus I am not that good a poet/ writer.
aww that's not true i looked at your works they are beautiful
nah, bro, they arent that good.
no ur good i swear. Don't be so hard on yourself