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by SakuraFallsSweetly♥

  • Poetry
  • Lyrical

Published August 30, 2011

In Poems

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Rock n' Roll Queen
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Rock n' Roll Queen wrote a review Review · Aug 30, 2011

I really like this poem. Poems like this usually irk me, because they are overly sappy that I can't help to just role my eyes...(and no..I'm not a jaded girl who shuns anything to do with love hehe)

However, this was different. It was still cute, but I could tolerate it & I actually liked it.

Call me a comic,
But he saved my heart when no-one else,
would bother with it, and I think that's heroic,
That makes him my hero,
And me his sidekick


This was the cutest part!

Happy writing!

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dancingmangos
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dancingmangos wrote a review Review · Aug 30, 2011

I have a boyfriend that I like so so so much, and this is just so perfect :D I can especially relate to the dork part; he's so dorky sometimes, but that's what makes him mine <3

I just overall love this. The only problem I had with it was some flow issues, but other than that, this is just great :)

Keep writing!



See, we could have been called The Shoes.
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