POD 34 -Voices

by JC

Published June 11, 2007

In POD

Philosophy of the Dark

Chapter 34

-Voices

The thoughts tumble in and out of my mind. What is going to happen? When will it be over? Will I ever be free?

Tammy’s evidence was flimsy, Ortega managed to make his

own. What will happen if I get said guilty? Is it even possible? Could I really

be blamed?

The sad truth is yes.

Maybe I can’t stay here, hoping for something better to come

along. I can’t keep wishing that things will change. I can’t keep listening to

the little voices inside me saying, “people change.”

People don’t change. Not for the better, not even for the worse.

The only thing that could change is a mindset, but the desire

will always be there.

He will always want to hurt me. And I will always be too weak to

fight back.

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Chapter Order:

30:3

34

30:4

35

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:!: COMING SOON!!!

Chapter 30:4 -The Verdict

haha, just kidding.

NOW POSTED

34 squared- growing up

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JC
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JC commented Comment · Jun 18, 2007

hehe congrats!
=D

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Emerson
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Emerson commented Comment · Jun 18, 2007

This was really short... lol.


On another note, I'm finally reading in order =D

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JC
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JC commented Comment · Jun 14, 2007

hehe, okay. I'll be sure to tell everybody when I post the verdict, seeing as it's a big thing. Or is it??? OHH! The suspense! hehe. I'm actually almost done with that chapter, I might post some tonight. I'll see. =D

Once again, thanks for reading this everybody!
-JC

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sworddance
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sworddance wrote a review Review · Jun 13, 2007

hey JC! Looks like I was remiss for a while- I didn't see you'd posted more >.<

Oh the suspense! :D I can't wait to see what happens with the verdict, yet at the same time I'm nervous to find out. I'll say this for you- if anything, you're really good at making us care what happens to the character! hehe which at the moment could be good or bad- good for you, but bad for those of us who are now waiting on the edge of our seats for the verdict. >.< grrrr.........

anyway, good work, and hurry up with more for us XD

ta!

~sworddance

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Alainna
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Alainna commented Comment · Jun 12, 2007

Argh....the suspense is killing me!!!

Short but good, I'm fully submerged in your style of writing!

Keep it up and PM me when you post more as the portfolios are down!!

Alainna
xxxxxx

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JC
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JC commented Comment · Jun 11, 2007

hehe. Yup, my shortest chapter yet! I should be done with the verdict tonight, so =D!!!

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Twit
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Twit commented Comment · Jun 11, 2007

So SHORT!!! And the verdict's next... Oh the suspense!!



I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom