“We must be swift as the coursing river
with all the force of a great typhoon
with all the strength of a raging fire
mysterious as the dark side of the mo-“
Er- What?
You've caught me singing!
how gafferwahking
GAFFERWAHKING- Holographic Ladybug Doesn’t care
i haven’t
SCARED
you
OFF
yrt HAVE I?
Well then
just sit on your wuFfy bottoms DON’T CAREctrl1
AND coMplain a. -river
IIIIIIIIIttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
I DON’Y CARE
because I’M CRAZY
HE-HE!
Lkie, omg, you’ve already done tis
Iknow It’s geeting old
Well maybe it thinks you’r old@@@@@@@
IHAVERAINBOWBUNNIESUPMYSOCKS9999999999
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( why do ikeephi tting ctrl
*Walks on ceiling* i’v ficksted the problem, sires*
*I LIED!
Nineninenineninenineninenine
*putd ib bunny ears)(
So, I make joke, yes?
pure enjoyment, yes
(yes!)
BANGS HANDS ON GAVEL
so why I hurt
why did KEEFE di it-------why?
You saw it coming
Whaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!
YOU ‘V’ LOS -T YIU~~ APOSTROPH!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
IT COST ME O.4444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444446
MILLION
YEN!6
Enough with the clichessssss, you
Writers~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I’m hav’ed anoughthepuffletil of your seriousitiy!
My cat’s better than youses
Time to end this
(HIPPIE MUSIC) No. It’s only started.
Jsiw89ue83jduiehdnxcjiehfu84reiryufhdeudihfru is the main character of my serious novel.
He is about a serious thing thatdoes serious other things
who-whoooop!
SANDWHICH! sandwhich! all the way down!
GIVE NE youR fingers!
I’m a justification (Cue funny drawing.
So don’t take me seriously. Write on because I write for fun. And without aim[\|
Ah! Bird!
Hide behind the shrubbery! There is none!
Uh…. here, bird! take my sister! What?!
6!
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Uh... Heya! Trelose here to review this... odd... piece.
First, if your intent was to make me feel as if I was slipping into insanity, I do believe your mission was accomplished.
Normally, I dislike random poetry for the sake of randomness, but... I feel as if it was that, along with a perfect representation of insanity. It made me smile and quirk my eyebrow (quite high up, I might add... I need a new ceiling now.) Other than that... I'm not sure I know how to review the rest of this except for two pieces of advice:
One, please don't put it so far over that I have to use a bar to scroll to the side for me to view it. (This is a personal preference, and maybe it was intentional. It doesn't dock any mental points off of your review.)
Two, please DON'T seek help. I love the insanity.
Keep on bein' crazy and fun, please!
Hiya! Thanks for the review! The scroll bar thing was because of the formatting. I could have changed it, but so many things would have messed up in turn. When I put it up, YWS does mess my poem up a little bit and I can only fix some of the mistakes without great consequence. Anyway, that's my rant. Thanks again!
Oh, okay! That's why I tried not to push too hard on that. Formatting is... weird, to say the least. Thanks for the response! And, again, great job on the review!
Meerkat here for reviewing!
First of all, I love the stylistic choices made in this piece. The formatting was crazy, creative, wild, and fun, like a roller coaster for the eyeballs.
Aside from that, I don't really know how to properly review something like this. If there were any typos, I certainly wouldn't be able to tell!
I noticed that amidst the nonsensical humor were a few logical sentences. "So don't take me seriously. Write on because I write for fun." That is good advice, I am sure. The rest of the poem was lovably insane, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible.
Have a nice night, and thank you for writing.
6!
Meerkat here for reviewing!
First of all, I love the stylistic choices made in this piece. The formatting was crazy, creative, wild, and fun, like a roller coaster for the eyeballs.
Aside from that, I don't really know how to properly review something like this. If there were any typos, I certainly wouldn't be able to tell!
I noticed that amidst the nonsensical humor were a few logical sentences. "So don't take me seriously. Write on because I write for fun." That is good advice, I am sure. The rest of the poem was lovably insane, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible.
Have a nice night, and thank you for writing.
6!
Thanks for the review! On a side note: the logical-ish part actually had something to do with the reason why wrote this. Random fact of the day!
Heh. 6!
Hello there, This is beautiful hahaha. I like your use of formatting! It is fun and creative. I like the randomness and flow of the story / poetry which is nice. I would love to read more of your work. Hope this help in some way! Nice to read your work.~Whatgoescomes
Thank you!