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Hello! This was a pretty ok poem. The idea that it expressed was interesting and I find that I can relate to your or your characters uncertainty over what is right and wrong, what is good and bad. However, while I liked this in your poem, I didn't like how it had literally no pattern. It kind of throw me, since it was in the poetry section. I also didn't like the layout, the dots between the stanzas made the piece seem disconnected unnecessarily awkward. In all, this poem could some work, but I must compliment you on the content, because I like the fluctuation between good and bad.
herby

Hello!!! Authorian here for a revewww~~

This was a little confusing, but nice to read all the same. It was simple and I think it was mostly metaphorical, which I liked.

Let me quickly point out one typo before I continue-
Because I’m the little angle
Angle should be spelled Angel

Now onto the nitty gritty.

I wouldn't rate this poem as amazing or anything. You set out to tell this poem and you did. It's entertaining, thought provoking, and unigue. I enjoyed reading it and found it interesting. It feels like this was you stretching you poetic talent rather than aiming for 'that one piece'.

Overall, I like your style and would like to read more of your poems in the future! Keep writing

Best regards,

Authorian~~