Good Morning/Afternon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world)
Continuing on
First Impression: Here we learn more about the characters of the two guards which is great and they begin their journey.
And let's begin,
A thin strip of light lay over one side of Buck's face when he awoke the next morning. He screwed up the eye caught in it, groaning. Sometimes the execution of an early morning plan was significantly tougher than the concoction. He'd moved his pallet a few feet before settling down to sleep so that it was directly in front of this narrow window, and he'd be woken up as soon as dawn broke. The two guards' body clocks would likely wake them soon anyway, but he probably had about half an hour. He wriggled out of the sleeping back and knelt at the side, where he'd left the bucket.
That's a good start. Also some good bits of humor.
Buck nodded. Hilene was back to sentences longer than three words, it would seem. Maybe he had just needed some sleep last night. Before he could test again by asking him a question, the door swung open behind him.
So has he just never had an extended conversation with Hilene before?
Buck’s eyebrows shot up and he forgot his next line of enquiry. “I didn’t mean to drag him away from his family!”
“No, no. She left Resador City years ago. She’s a trader,” Hilene said. He glanced towards Victane, who was still on his side facing the fire. “But he’s leaving the home where she grew up. I think he just needed a moment.”
Okay, this seems like something Buck should probably have known or at least asked about from the two guards before they left.
As Hilene finished off some bread that had come with the toast, he said, “We should go wake Victane. But Buck… Just, you asked why Victane brightened up towards the end of the night. Well, you’re about the same age as his daughter. And I think he might see her reflected in you.”
Why would this be the first time that this is coming up? From what was shown earlier the guards have worked together with Buck for quite some time to come up with all sorts of plots.
“Sure,” Buck said, wondering a moment later if he’d been expected to haggle. But Pires had set him up with plenty of money; there was no reason to offer less than Dosine seemed to find fair.
Here we have to wonder how Pires managed to get away with that. Wouldn't a significant amount of money being given away be noticed and be considered a little odd to be given to someone who was banished from the court.
Buck gave her a smile and wave, then mimicked the two guards as they kicked the sides of their horses and headed back towards the road.
And we're off. I wonder how long this journey is going to take.
And that is it for this chapter. Another somewhat short review with this being a pretty short segement.
Overall: We learn a couple of things about Victane and Hillene which is good because it looks like they will become fairly important in the times to come. Also nice humor as usual. One thing though is that Buck seems to have just totally forgotten about his friends. I'd expect him to remember them at least a couple of times before he eventually starts to think of them less. Here as soon as Buck left the city hall he stopped thinking about his other friends.
As always take what you think will help and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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