Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world)
And we come to the end of the ninth chapter.
First Impression: Well Raddig is either scared of being discovered by someone or doesn't care for Erson as much as Erson thinks.
The cool breeze stung in Buck's eyes as he wandered home the next morning. His head didn't hurt too bad, but it was fuzzy, and he couldn't really feel his feet properly. All in all, not his worst hangover ever. He pressed the ball of his hand against his left eye as he crossed one of the little bridges across the stream and tried to stop it stinging. Somehow the insides of his nostrils seemed to smell of wine.
Well this is a great description to start.
He wondered if Erson was any less hungover. Buck had ended up sleeping on a long soft sofa in Myal’s room, which was next to Erson’s at the back of that little dining room. It had been such a cosy night, just the three of them, then later just Buck and Myal. But he’d been woken by the door of the next room slamming closed, and presumably Erson stomping out to meet his mother. Buck wondered what in the world he and the queen were talking about now, but he had to get home. Besides, he hadn’t figured out the good hiding spots in the palace yet. So Myal had fixed him a little breakfast from the pantry, then given him a quick hug and sat down to wait on her brother.
Well Buck and the Princess got on well. Also poor Erson having to meet his mother early in the morning like that.
As he reached his first turn, he heard a call from somewhere out in front of him. Instinctively, he looked up at where it had come from, and spotted Raddig on his wall. Had he called out to him? He could do without an awkward conversation with him this morning, though perhaps all he wanted was a reassurance that Buck wouldn't let his secret slip.
Wouldn't Raddig spot him? Considering the sort of thing he is about to do you'd expect him to look around a couple of times and check if there are prying eyes.
He stopped where the path started to curve around to the left and moved off into a flat grassy space to the right. The hills rose steeply on all sides of the little area, as everywhere else had started to slope upwards by that far out from the path. This meant it was nice and sheltered. Buck had noticed the hollow on the way to the palace on his first night after arrival, but hadn't been sure what it was for. Now, as the man set down his rucksack and pulled a thick canvas sheet down off some wooden frames, Buck realised that it was a marketplace.
That's a great description there.
"Hey, can I help you?" The man was crouched beside the bottom corner of a stall, looking around at Buck.
I'm assuming this man skipped that concert and has not heard Buck at all or he would have recognized him.
"Ah, the absent minds of the royal valley keep me in business, don't you know! Can I interest you in some jewelry? I just picked up the most intricate piece.
Well that sounds like it's a bit too convenient for Buck.
"A bracelet?" he asked, opening it up. Inside Buck saw a circle of silver set into a square of black foam. He pinched the sides of the bracelet and pulled it out of the foam. It was thicker than he'd expected, more like a cuff, with some beautiful blue stones inlaid in three rows. The lines of the stones were staggered, with the bottom of one line going a little past the top of the next before stopping. And the silver felt heavy, solid - real.
That's a great description of the bracelet there.
"To be honest, probably the only people in this valley who could afford it for what it's actually worth are the royal family, but why should they have all the fun? Ten gold pieces for it," Ikilyn said, raising his chin, though still smiling.
So did you create some kind of currency system for this? Also this reminds me. What happened to those horses they rode into town? They haven't been mentioned again.
"Yeah. Yeah, I'll take it," Buck said, because there was no way Raddig was ever going to admit to this if he was playing the sort of long game Buck was now imagining as he rapidly sobered up. He was going to need to see his reaction.
"Brilliant! Fastest I've ever made a sale!" Ikilyn said, as they exchanged the money for the box.
Buck shook his hand and thanked him, then spun around on one heel and started to stride home, head getting clearer by the second. He was going to have to have a talk with Raddig.
That promises some excitement in the next chapter which is great.
And that's it for this one.
Overall: Well good on Buck for remembering all of that while having a hangover. Also interesting addition to the story there with Raddig's decision.
As always take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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