Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
A smaller part here which is good for my brain.
First Impression: That was a low blow by Pires to throw his under the bus like that or was that just another part of the plan? Probably not.
Anyway getting on with this. This might be short because there wasn't much to cover in this chapter.
Back on the stage, Buck stretched his arms, lowered himself up and down on tip-toes a few times, and took a deep breath. Everyone was settling back down, including Erson on the couch beside Pires. Buck caught Pires's eye and she nodded, slowly, counting down from ten with her fingers. Briefly, Buck glanced at Erson, whose mouth was hanging slightly open, presumably in anticipation. The last finger Pires left up was her right index finger, which she pointed at Buck and mouthed the word "Go".
That does not seem very subtle especially if the queen was also nearby but I suppose the sleepiness works well enough to counteract that.
As Buck reached the end of this section, however, he slipped into song to tribute Resador city court. He began with a crowd-favourite, with some call and reply about how there was no place they'd rather be. The replies were slightly subdued at first, but once everyone woke up from their poet-induced slumber they were toasting Buck with flagons held high. Pires squinted at him, but she joined in too, as did Erson. In fact, Erson's arms were in the air and his foot was pounding out a rhythm on the carpet. He didn't seem to notice that his mother was glaring at him in wide-eyed mortification.
This is a pretty interesting detail again.
Buck was glad he'd added in this section when he moved onto his poetical discussion of shepherds. Erson was sleepily laying back against his corner of the couch, while Pires glanced anxiously towards the Queen. This time, the Queen did not look round, nor did she make eye contact with any of the Resadorian citizens who snuck looks over their shoulder towards her. Rydone had explained to Buck that ever since the meeting he'd been in the rafters for, if someone in the city referred to 'shepherds' in the same sentence as the Queen, that could be roughly translated as 'the Queen's war is pointless, and she's a bigger fool than Bucket for engaging in it.' 'Bigger fool than Bucket' was a phrase Buck had often heard thrown around in drunken Resadorian arguments, but he'd never have imagined hearing it applied to a queen.
So the queen is beginning to be considered a fool by the public as well although she doesn't seem to have done anything about it. So either she's oblivious or doesn't care?
Before Pires had explained that she intended subtlety for the event, Buck had got started on a simple but loud song about how she and Erson would be a perfect match.
Well that sounds like a terrible idea.
Perhaps there's someone near to her,
Whose kindness is plain to see.
Definitely not very subtle.
"Enough!" he shouted, though Buck had had no intentions whatsoever of continuing.
His gaze flicked over to Pires, who would be about ready to deploy the 'pay him no heed, he is but a fool line' that had extricated them from countless situations over the years, but she said nothing. She glared at Buck, her own jaw clenching like Erson's. Buck gulped. Well, at least they were on the same page.
"Your grace, I can only apologise," Pires said after a moment. She pointed at the door with a stiff, unwavering index finger. "Bucket, get out!"
Well that was a dramatic turn of events though I sense that this another plan of Pires to use even the failure to get some brownie points with the prince. Or maybe I've been reading too many stories with convoluted plots.
Overall: Another amazing song. You really put some effort into those two. I barely have the discipline to string together a prophecy or two for my stories. A short but well written section.
As always take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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