Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
And beginning Chapter 11,
First Impression: Ohhh.. This is going to be a sad chapter for Erson. Really nice to see Myal's opinions. Also Buck has become a really good friend to these two which can be seen very clearly now. One thing is Buck seems far too sure of Raddig having vanished.
Anyway getting on with it,
Buck rubbed the back of his neck. When he had offered Raddig the money he needed to buy a ship, he'd taken it immediately. Buck was wondering now if he'd left the valley that very night. He hadn't been expecting an emotional goodbye from the man who was literally scamming Erson, but he could at least have left a letter so it wouldn't be up to Buck to explain what had happened.
So Pires actually gave him so much money that he could've bought a ship? Seeing as how little money he needed to make it to the north that seems a little excessive. Also Raddig is definitely portrayed as a horrible person.
"Myal, can you keep a secret?" Buck said. He actually felt his voice crack a bit as the weight of the past two days hit home.
Myal's eyes widened and she leaned forward to whisper, "What? What is it?"
Good on him to tell someone. Secrets like that really weigh you down.
Buck explained as much as he could without giving away the fact that he had paid off Raddig with Pires's money. He had been wondering what lie to tell to explain why he'd done it, so that he wouldn't have to reveal he wanted Erson free to marry Pires. But when it came to that part of the story, he found himself narrating his argument with Raddig with a fury that had been rumbling in his stomach for days. He had to fight to keep his voice low. So it was fairly easy to suggest that his motivations had been to keep Erson safe.
So what lie did he manage to concoct to cover that up? Feels like that was glossed over here.
"I'm sorry but I did! There was something so cold about him. He wasn't just quiet. Your friend Victane is quiet. Loilyn the singer - she's quiet - when she's not singing about backsides. But Raddig's just mean," Myal said, folding her arms.
Those are some great observations by Myal. But I thought Hilene was usually the quiet one and not Victane. Victane didn't seem to mind the court and all of it much while Hilene kept quiet in areas like that.
"Sort of," Myal said. She tilted her head back and forth. "He will be tired, but he and I usually go for a walk afterwards to stretch our legs. I can just have you go with him instead. I'll say I have, you know, a party to plan."
It is going to be a terrible blow to Erson.
Buck nodded vigorously and wrapped her up in a hug, squeezing tight.
Well that was a nice indicator of how close Buck has gotten. It's good that Buck seems to be doing this for Erson and Myal as much as he is doing this for Pires.
"Er, Buttane, hello," Erson said, standing up and coming over to the stage. "Have you seen Myal?"
"Uh... not in a while," Buck said, wondering if he said it if Myal had stayed away on purpose.
"We usually take a walk together after these notes have been taken," Erson said, scratching his head.
"I think she wasn't feeling great," Buck said, which really was not a lie. "I can come for a walk if you'd like?"
Erson smiled, and Buck's heart broke all over again.
That sets up what's sure to be an emotional chapter for Erson.
And that's it.
Overall: Good ending there. And a pretty good rendition of the sort of emotions involved in this type of thing.
As always take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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