Sometimes I end up
awake all night,
Trying to find your X,
which you lose every time.
Are you so bad at relationships?
Can't you keep her safe?
Every time you lose her,
I end up hitting my head.
Arithmetic, Geometry or Calculus,
Just keep everything to yourself,
Because neither does anyone wants’ them
nor do I myself.
Sometimes memorizing you're COS,
drives me so crazy,
that even the sanatorium’s doctors,
make excuses that they're busy.
I don't fear vampires,
nor any other creatures,
how much I fear-
your trigonometry!
I am so sorry that I have,
Such a grudge against you,
But I’m not at fault,
Though it can be your difficulty.
But I won’t blame you for it,
As there are others to,
Those Insane people,
Who put everything in a book.
No, not the mathematicians,
They were just great,
But those dumb heads,
Who made our texts.
Those people stuffed so much in them,
Resulting nothing useful,
Except for the four main aspects,
which we learned long ago.
Will someone tell me,
How Angles help in daily life?
Who cares if we can or cannot,
Bisect them or trisect them.
I don’t understand why,
They think us as geniuses,
When they themselves say,
Everyone’s not the same!
-Umaima
Wow! Really good! I HATE math with all my soul, so I'M not sorry for having a grudge against it, like you say in the poem! But it's really good.
There are just a few grammatical errors which you could edit quickly (I'm too lazy to point them out) but it's great overall.
The first stanza is so hilarious! It's my favourite! 
Keep it up.
Mist
Heyy Umaima!
This is SapphireFlames for reviewing your amazing poem!
Wow!!! your poem is soo good and amazing!!!
I loved it and enjoyed reading it thoroughly.
Wow!! even I feel the same with the 10th math its seriously so bugging especially Trigonometry! Remembering the sin , cos , tan and all the theta .....anyway lets leave that!
I love this part of the poem:
"Arithmetic, Geometry or Calculus,
Just keep everything to yourself,
Because neither does anyone wants’ them
nor do I myself."
its so funny.
the flow and stuff is perfect and alright!
Dude I loved it man!
keep it up!
I would like to see more of these types!
FutureAuthor,
SapphireFlames.
Wow This Is A Poem!! I mean I feel the same way!!
Here everything thats written is so darn true!
Trigonometry is a headache.
quadratic equations give me amnesia.
Ratios give me goosebumps,
And the question paper gives me a panic attack!
I do not fear dark as much
As I fear you...
You are the one whose
Problems' we find out
And you do nothing sitting
There on our nervous heads!
You big dumb big Maths!
I will throw you out of the window..lol
The throwing out of the window part is very common in our classes when the teachers scold us when we are talking...how will she manage to throw us out of the window anyway??lol
Anyways A very fine poem this one is and I must say you exactly told us how some of us feel when we do our math he he 
But Good woork this one is. Keep Writing!
"I don't fear vampires,
nor any other creatures,
how much I fear-
your trigonometry!
I am so sorry that I have,
Such a grudge against you,
But I’m not at fault,
Though it can be your difficulty.
But I won’t blame you for it,
As there are others to,
Those Insane people,
Who put everything in a book."
This was a fun and cute little poem!
You have a nice rhythym going all throughout this, but at some places it does mess up a litte or become a bit odd. Like in the eighth stanza, you say
No, not the mathematicians,
They were just great,
But those dumb heads,
Who made our texts.
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